User:Hedwig Li/Mu Shiying/ZimuW Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Hedwig Li
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Hedwig Li/Mu Shiying

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer? This is the first peer.
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? Yes, it does.
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections? Yes, it does.
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article? No, it's all included in the article.
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? It is very concise.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? Yes it is.
 * Is the content added up-to-date? Yes it is.
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong? No there isn't.
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics? No, it doesn't.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? Yes it is neutral.
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position? No there aren't.
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented? No there aren't.
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another? No it doesn't.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? Yes it is.
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic? Yes they are.
 * Are the sources current? Yes they are.
 * Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible? No, its all belong to one author.
 * Check a few links. Do they work? Yes the link works.

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read? Yes it is.
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors? There are few grammatical errors, but does not affect the reading.
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic? Yes it is well organized.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic? No.
 * Are images well-captioned? N/A
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations? N/A
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way? N/A

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject? No, its all from same author.
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject? Yes it represent all available literature.
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles? Yes it does follow.
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable? No it doesn't.

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete? Yes it does.
 * What are the strengths of the content added? Its very strong.
 * How can the content added be improved? Find some information from another author(secondary sources) could improve the quality of this page.