User:HeidiWashburn/TV Girl/Addayjayne Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Heidiwashburn


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * TV Girl
 * TV Girl

Evaluate the drafted changes
Give more background on the history of how the band came together

Give a short description of each member in the band. Tell the readers a little bit about each of them & how they came into the band.

Add a picture or two of the band, or of each member individually where you give a brief background on them

Give some more examples of influences they use in their music (if there are any more)

In the discography try to include a little information on each song/album/ep etc. Like when it was released or any other background information regarding that particular piece.