User:HelenGood 22/Online social movement/Caroline.sonnen Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Helen Good 22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:HelenGood%2022/Online_social_movement?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Online social movement

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hi Helen!

Review:

I really like the additions you have made and this a great hashtag to bring awareness to. The writing is well done and you give a good variety of conventions!

Feedback:

Where will this addition be added within the article? I can see it fitting well under "Uses of the internet" then under the section "improved communication and increased pubic awareness."

I think you could go in a bit more detail to the impact of the hashtags for example "AmINext" is really powerful and could go a bit more in detail to why it is named this and what that means. You could also expand more on the impact these have had changes that have been made or they are working to make because of the movement?

Well done!