User:Helenaladah/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
https://en.wikiquote.org/wiki/1948_Palestinian_exodus

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because it’s an important historical event pertaining to my family that not everyone knows about.

Evaluate the article
The overall article is very long and full of a lot of opinions. The article could be more concise and include more UN sources. There is only one person engaged in the discussion. Although there are many reputable sources throughout the article, they are scattered and no not come in chronological order. There are many different editors and therefore the article often repeats itself. The authors all use different terminology which is confusing. Overall the article does not convey the historical and emotional significance of the Nakba directly relating to Palestinians. One strength is that the article has a lot of information, it could be improved by synthesizing information to make the chain of events more clear to readers. It’s well developed but unclear. The article’s authors all seem to be somewhat biased towards varying racial and ethnic groups. Images in the article are helpful and well captioned. However, only one image is included which is not substantial.