User:Hellenlopez/Grace Barraza Vega/Emilyorozc Peer Review

Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hellenlopez


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hellenlopez/Grace_Barraza_Vega?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is concise and tells the reader exactly what the Wikipedia page is about. The content seems to be accurate and concise but mostly mentions her life and not her artistic accomplishments. Hellenlopez did a great job at maintaining neutrality. I did not find any biased statements. The content is organized and has distinct sections that make it easy to read. I see that Hellenlopez has added several references to back up her article. Assuming these sources legit I don't see why it wouldn't pass the notability requirements. The strength of this article is the number of references and evidence used to back up her facts. Maybe add more description regarding the art? Other than that the article seems solid.