User:Hellenlopez/Martinez isbel/Hellenlopez Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Emilyorozc, Emily Orozco


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Emilyorozc/Martinez, Isabel


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Emilyorozc/Martinez, Isabel

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

- is concise and to the point

- might need to be a little more detailed, seems to vague

- introduces artist and important info that is not repeated in bio which makes for good organization

Content

- up to date

- might want to include more biography if you were able to find some

- like is there more artwork, like remember its activist project so for it to be published it needs info that makes her notable

Tone and Balance

- everything seems neutral and biased

Source and References

- little amount of references

- remember to cite every sentence that is not your own

Organization

- every part is separated by headings

Images and Media

- no images included, I know we were able to but I am not sure how that works

- does this artist have a website or social media or articles they wrote, you can include that too

Overall

- it seems good you just need to maybe find more info if possible but I know its hard with some artists

- like can even include a specific piece or style she is known for other than just being a painter

- can even add how's she's Chicanx or Latinx or like something like that indicates how she identifies