User:HelloWorld194/Nazi racial theories/H2lam Peer Review

General info
HelloWorld194
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:HelloWorld194/Nazi racial theories
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nazi racial theories
 * Nazi racial theories

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: The lead has been updated to reflect proposed changes to the article and introduces the article's topics. However, I'd suggest the lead information be placed under the bolded "Lead" title at the end so that it's easier to see.

Content: Content is relevant to the topic. Might be a good idea to show where it will be placed in the article.

Tone and Balance: Content added is neutral.

Sources and References: Sources are not backed by a reliable source. The source linked is a Wikipedia article.

Organization: The content is easy to understand and written well without spelling errors.

Images and Media: Not applicable, no images were added.

Overall Impressions: The content does improve the original article. I would suggest some improvements on how the proposed changes are displayed on the user's sandbox and to cite from a secondary source, such as a peer reviewed article.