User:HelloWorld194/Nazi racial theories/Peinini Peer Review

General info
HelloWorld194
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:HelloWorld194/Nazi_racial_theories?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Nazi racial theories

Evaluate the drafted changes
I like how the writer suggested including testimonials from victims within the original article as I believe it does provide a deeper understanding about the impact of Nazism. In the copyediting assignment, I believe there was a typo made in the writer's revised sentence, as it should be: "The text categorizes the European races in descending orders in the Nazi racial hierarchy: the Nordic (including the Phalic sub-race), Mediterranean, Dinaric, Alpine, and East Baltic races". I do agree that this is more assertive than the original sentence. One of the sources the writer references seems to be another Wikipedia article "Nazi Party", which I believe Wikipedia specified as an unreliable source.