User:Henrymn1/Camponotus dumetorum/Oluchiao Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Henrymn1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Henrymn1/Camponotus_dumetorum?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Camponotus dumetorum

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

The lead has been updated to reflect new content. The lead has an introductory sentence that describes the articles topic. The lead doesn't not have a description of the articles main sections but overall I think the lead was nice.

Content

The content of the article focused on anatomy, distribution and ecological impacts. These additions fill in some gaps in the initial article.

Tone and Balance

The tone of the article is overall neutral. None of the claims seem to biased in any way.

Sources and References

The content is backed by reliable sources. The sources range from 1970 to 2021 so there are some older sources as well as some newer sources. The sources also have a diverse spectrum of authors. The links of the sources work.

Organization

The draft is well-written and concise. There are a few grammatical errors in the draft. The species names need to be italisized. The content was broken off into a few sections and I think the topic is well-organized.

Images and Media

There are no images in the article.

Overall Impressions

Overall the article is good! The only thing is that you forgot to italicize the species names. I think the article can be improved by adding more information and by fixing some of the grammatical errors.