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Valentine Joseph:
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Hi Anish. First off, my sympathies- didn't realize until I dug up the obit article that you were his grandson :)

I noticed your request on the WP:SL page for someone to have a look through the article. While I'm certainly not a pro at this, I did go through it and made some changes. I don't know if you'll agree with them all, but there was some stuff in there that aren't really encyclopaedic- things like "he was a devout Catholic", for instance, aren't really things you can support even with third party literature, for obvious reasons. Stuff that was borderline I left in with a bit of rewording (I thought it'd be a shame to remove that bit about his interest in teaching after retirement, for instance). I also moved some inline citations around- while some folks on here like their citations directly after each statement, regardless of whether or not it's in the middle of a sentence, there were some places where it was pretty difficult to read the actual text because multiple citations would break up the text. I also added one reference for the family bit at the end, but that anecdote about the riots will definitely need citations from somewhere to stay in, I think, since it's a quote.

All in all, I hope you like the result :) - ක - (talk) 12:49, 31 August 2017 (UTC)

Wow. First, I'd like to say thanks - ක -! Just in case you can't find this I have given the link on your talk page.

Yes, I believe that there might be more reliable sources coming out soon, so I can reference that at a later date - thanks very much for pointing out and correcting the errors :). Regards - Heptanitrocubane (talk) 13:27, 31 August 2017 (UTC)
 * No worries :D - ක - (talk) 15:19, 31 August 2017 (UTC)