User:Herk0000/Susan McKinney Steward/JaimeA10 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Herk0000


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Herk0000/Susan McKinney Steward


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Susan McKinney Steward

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead paragraph isn't present in the draft, but the lead already in the article well summarizes the significance of Susan McKinney Susan. The information you contributed to the article is very good, but you should include citations for the sentences explaining her possible motives instead of only citing at the end of the paragraph. You should also add more description and a reference for the paper she delivered in 1911 called "Colored American Woman" because I feel like that paper could contextualize her views. Also, when you go to add your contributions to the original article, be sure to put the references in the right format with links because in your draft they are just typed references. Overall, I think your writing is very good and the information you included was significant, concise, and organized. Good job!