User:Heruiter21/The Freedom Singers/Wikitalks22 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Heruiter21/The Freedom Singers


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Heruiter21/The_Freedom_Singers?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://www.jstor.org/stable/j.ctt1kft8ff.8

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content added to the article explains a lot about what the Freedom Singers did and even some of the songs they sing, I love the part about how they sang a song on the same podium that Martin Luther King Jr gave his "I Have a Dream" speech. If there is information on how were these people persecuted by others, it would be good for the article.

All the links are good and easy to access the informational articles, books, and journal. The content that is in the article is backed up by a second source.

The content that is added in neutral, it gives only informational content about the Freedom Singers and does not pick a side anywhere in the article. It does not explain any negative moments in the Freedom Singers lives but only explains the good things they did. I feel it would be good to show more vital moments in the lives of the Freedom singers.