User:Heyitsjami/Campus sexual assault/If you ain't runnin' game, Say my name Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Heyitsjami


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Heyitsjami/Campus_sexual_assault?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Campus sexual assault

Evaluate the drafted changes
Sexual assault is one of those topics that can get people very emotional, very fast. Therefore, I believe you do a good job of sticking to the facts and not going beyond that. All the sources used I would say fall under Wikipedia's Notability requirements as reliable and independent sources. Though, I kind of wish there was more free sources available so others could follow up on something if they, themselves, are researching the topic or simply want to explore it more. I also love that last sentence which includes men at the end, since this is a problem that also affects males. Overall great job.