User:Heylee dooley/sandbox

= Article Evaluation =


 * Content:
 * the subsections were broken up into topics that make sense to clump together
 * personally I feel that more is to the cuisine aspect of Chinese culture than was discussed
 * Tone:
 * very neutral
 * only stated facts
 * Sources:
 * a lot of effort went into writing this article and the resources used all have merit
 * did have some issues with sources being flagged for cite errors
 * does appear to have some bias writing in it
 * Talk Page:
 * the talk page for this article is substantial which indicated many people have worked together to make the article better
 * does appear to be part of any Wikiprojects

Article Selection

 * Oracle bone script
 * has a good background start
 * neutral tone
 * part of a wikiproject
 * large talk page
 * has lots of overview information already
 * detailed on specific divinations and their purpose can be added
 * Zhou dynasty specific divinations are well known however this article gives just an overview of them
 * I can add specific examples
 * scholarly article:https://www.jstor.org/stable/10.1086/588495?Search=yes&resultItemClick=true&searchText=oracle&searchText=bones&searchUri=%2Faction%2FdoBasicSearch%3Ffilter%3D%26amp%3BQuery%3Doracle%2Bbones&ab_segments=0%2Ftbsub-1%2Frelevance_config_with_tbsub&refreqid=search%3A1a91152a12b73da66d9185c8a5ee26d7&seq=4#metadata_info_tab_contents
 * Fuzhou people
 * has very minimal information on Wikipedia
 * neutral tone
 * part of wikiprojects
 * has large talk page regarding larger wikiproject on China
 * not much information regarding the history of the dialect
 * could add more information regarding specific important people instead of just listing them
 * not many sources but they all appear bias
 * scholarly article: https://www.jstor.org/stable/23825679?Search=yes&resultItemClick=true&searchText=fuzhou&searchText=people&searchUri=%2Faction%2FdoBasicSearch%3Ffc%3Doff%26amp%3Bgroup%3Dnone%26amp%3BQuery%3Dfuzhou%2Bpeople%26amp%3Bwc%3Don%26amp%3Bacc%3Don&ab_segments=0%2Ftbsub-1%2Frelevance_config_with_tbsub&refreqid=search%3A29a45aae7c56490a35ca0aa0c0b116d7&seq=1#metadata_info_tab_contents
 * Article: https://www-jstor-org.libproxy.albany.edu/stable/20062658?read-now=1&seq=1#page_scan_tab_contents
 * https://www-jstor-org.libproxy.albany.edu/stable/j.ctv3wdbw4.9?seq=1#metadata_info_tab_contents
 * https://www-jstor-org.libproxy.albany.edu/stable/20062630?Search=yes&resultItemClick=true&searchText=fujian&searchText=cultural&searchText=background&searchUri=%2Faction%2FdoAdvancedSearch%3Fc3%3DAND%26amp%3Bf2%3Dall%26amp%3Bq0%3Dfujian%2Bcultural%2Bbackground%26amp%3Bq3%3D%26amp%3Bc1%3DAND%26amp%3Bisbn%3D%26amp%3Bq2%3D%26amp%3Bacc%3Don%26amp%3Bsd%3D%26amp%3Bf6%3Dall%26amp%3Bq4%3D%26amp%3Bc5%3DAND%26amp%3Bc6%3DAND%26amp%3Bf0%3Dall%26amp%3Bpt%3D%26amp%3Bq5%3D%26amp%3Bc2%3DAND%26amp%3Bq6%3D%26amp%3Bf1%3Dall%26amp%3Bf3%3Dall%26amp%3Bla%3D%26amp%3Bf4%3Dall%26amp%3Bc4%3DAND%26amp%3Bed%3D%26amp%3Bq1%3D%26amp%3Bf5%3Dall%26amp%3Bgroup%3Dnone&ab_segments=0%2Ftbsub-1%2Frelevance_config_with_tbsub&refreqid=search%3A448bebbc3b7fd2c4257cc3f2f8f68952&seq=1#metadata_info_tab_contents
 * Chinese opera
 * has good background for origin
 * neutral tone
 * part of wikiprojects
 * has a detailed talk page on larger scaled project on China
 * not many details yet of specific transitions throughout history
 * more detail can be added to the different time period sections
 * scholarly article: https://www-jstor-org.libproxy.albany.edu/stable/pdf/20072532.pdf?ab_segments=0%252Ftbsub-1%252Frelevance_config_with_tbsub&refreqid=excelsior%3Aa8574ce9c80614932dc111283dc3bf49

Fuzhou people article additions

 * Source 2 (Boundaries and Beyond): Information that could be added to historical background on Fuzhou as a city as the demeaner of city folk
 * many issues in mid 1850s regarding English missionary work
 * William Welton and Robert David Jackson
 * Fuzhou wanted any activity regarding foreigners to be kept quiet as to not uproar the local people (mainly residency)
 * Fuzhou natives at the time could be said to be against confronting Europeans regarding business matters
 * treaty of Nanjing, Article 2 made it so that British people would be able to stay and live in cities such as Guangzhou Shanghai and Fuzhou
 * many issues around Sino-British diplomacy (look into details)
 * In Fuzhou, prior to housing missionaries there was no debate about the rights of residents
 * Guangzhou rebelled first against foreigners entering area once unvisited, Fuzhou soon thought of following their lead
 * Fuzhou residents were under the wrong impression that of the 5 port cities only their city was allowing foreign residency, although not true this caused issues (shanghai and Ningbo also allowed residency)
 * simply misunderstanding the situation led to a majority of the issues
 * Daoists and Monks showed much hospitality to missionaries in Fuzhou
 * it appeared from the 1850's that misunderstanding regarding the relationship potential between china and the west was mutual
 * Source 1( urbanization in china...)
 * regarding urbanization, Fujian has a lower rate of urbanization compared to other parts of china
 * different parts of china experience more governmental role in aspects of life such as urbanization
 * in general, china is behind in urbanization due to gov policies that have too much control over economic aspects
 * in Fujian (where Fuzhou is located) a study between the end of june and beginning of july in 2001 looks into urbanization
 * Fujian has rich fishing abilities and many resources readily available from the coastline & transporting by sea advantages
 * since the 90's Taiwan has shown larger interest in business deals with fujian
 * Fujian is rained 8th in the nation for population size
 * largely agricultural
 * S Fujian is more developed than N Fujian (Fuzhou is in the north- the capital)
 * if desire to move to Fuzhou, due to high demand high education levels as well as many skills are necessary to compete
 * 41.6% people in Fujian live in cities and towns rather than rural areas
 * in Fujian, if you live in urban areas but have non farming jobs you can not receive permanent residency therefore you are considered "temporarily" living there
 * larger cities (like Fujian) have large migration numbers that they do not encourage the immigration
 * Source 4 (learning... part 2)
 * local lineages were proven to have a role in a successful rate of education in Fuzhou
 * lineage members would make sure success in their communities education was occurring
 * elementary school in Fuzhou was concerned to be a private matter which then led to their later success with larger examinations
 * most of the shu-yuan (around 18) that were associated with Fuzhou were founded in Ming and Qing dynasties (maybe some from Sung but less supportive evidence of that)

Response to Peer Review

 * Thank you Ceili for your feedback on my current work. Based on your feedback I can tell I am on the right track to updating the Fuzhou article. After looking into how to increase the work level, I plan to increase introductory material rather than just listing facts. I also plan to evaluate the context of the information I found and expand on it to allow the largest understanding by readers who may view my additions. My article already has many pictures within the article however, I feel the addition of some premodern images of how Fuzhou people dressed and looked will help draw together a better image of the overall cultural context I am portraying if available.
 * difficulty in finding photos to add
 * added links to give background knowledge to people who may not understand dynamic differences among the different dynasties discussed