User:Hez28/Lake Lucerne/Katiebusch7 Peer Review

Hi Zihan,

Below are my comments on your first draft. Your current word count is 786 and you have 12 refs (7 scientific articles) remember to make sure to get 8 scientific articles. This is a phenomenal start this will make it way easier in the end to round it off to a final product.

Like I discussed in class make sure to link the more scientific words to their own wiki pages. Your intro is extremely informative and well written. Now you need to look into the current research being done on the lake. Make sure you have at least 4 paragraphs on the current research being done on lake Lucerne. If you need help finding info on the current research let me know!

Another final note is that you do not need to put in text citation since wiki uses the foot note citations (the small numbers above words are the in-text citation).

-Katie

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