User:Hfarrugia21/Architecture in Morocco/BellabsDreamLab Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hfarrugia, Shea.leb, and Smancione's


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hfarrugia21/Architecture_in_Morocco?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Moroccan architecture

Evaluate the drafted changes
- Citations need to be added, but I imagine that is already a rip.

- Similarly, I would suggest that the references be formatted the way that the original article does it.

- Various words or phrases could likely be used to link to other wiki articles. For example, highlighting "ksars" and clicking on the links panel brings up a matching wiki article to put a link in for. Some readers might want to know what a "ksar" is in depth, so adding that link might be helpful. It also makes it that you don't have to define every new term in the article when a link can help catch people up.

- Maybe change, "They both designed these architecturally and also built the structures themselves" from the extinction paragraph to "they both designed and built the structures themselves".

- Maybe move the sentence, "A lot of African Architecture tends to be made out of some sort of mud brick, terracotta or clay mixture this is due to their dry climate and the natural resources found in Morocco and the rest of the African Continent" from the ksars page to the materials page.

- Possibly change the "extinction" header to specify it being about ksars. Perhaps make the Ksars header bigger and so the extinction header looks like a subheader for the ksars section?

- Overall, it looks like there is a lot of new information for many subjects in the original article. The new information looks cohesive and adds to the original text in a meaningful way. Keep up the good work! :)