User:Hford13/Margaret Brundage/Abigailcampbell7 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hford13


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hford13/Margaret_Brundage?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Margaret Brundage

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content added to the career section is relevant to the topic. I think that the sentence is a good addition because it prefaces the information in the following sentence. Without this addition, it would be more difficult to understand why complaints about her work increased. It is a neutral comment that doesn't attempt to persuade the reader one way or another. The sentence does not have any grammatical errors and it is cited by a reliable source. The deletions and editing of some of the existing content and sources are beneficial to the article.