User:Hgabrie/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Dorothee Kern


 * Article Evaluation
 * There is very little information on this page. There is only one section of the article, and it is lacking a lead summary. The existing citations appear to be reliable, but there are not enough of them.


 * Sources
 * https://www.aau.edu/research-scholarship/featured-research-topics/choreographing-cancer-treatment
 * https://kernlab-brandeis.github.io/
 * http://www.bio.brandeis.edu/faculty/kern.html
 * https://relaytx.com/
 * https://endpts.com/dorothee-kerns-path-from-basketball-star-to-founder-of-billion-dollar-biotechs-five-prime-therapeutics-hands-the-reins-to-genentech-vet/
 * https://www.brandeis.edu/now/2016/august/kern-basketball-biochemistry.html
 * https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/32079772/
 * https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/14675554/
 * https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/27652309/

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Mary Lou Clements-Mann


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article has significantly more information than the other articles I have evaluated. There are a lot of cross-references on Wikipedia, but there are only 5 sources cited. There is little information about her personal life. The issue with this article is that there is a lack of sources not already cited in the article. Thus, most of the reliable information on the internet about Clements-Mann has already been written here.


 * Sources
 * n/a

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Eloise E. Clark


 * Article Evaluation
 * This article lacks distinct sections and a lead summary. There is little information about her personal and early life. There are only 2 sources cited in this article although there are no grammatical errors. Again, I am having difficulties finding reliable sources that are not already cited in the article.


 * Sources
 * https://www.mbl.edu/obituaries/eloise-e-clark/
 * https://pubs.acs.org/doi/pdf/10.1021/bi00883a021?casa_token=QbdQG_6cT24AAAAA:X4ga0XyYicOIBlUHb4R_mF5aIlOI5IZFhcbuS6fgF0TWnNJq87TH5pBEigL6Mfg7K1tD0LBBpUzBdTqU