User:Hienn211/Trimesitylvanadium/Jdk22 Peer Review

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Opening sentence is relatively clear but I think you might want to rewrite the oxidation state portion to flow a little better. (with... a vanadium oxidation state of 3) for example. You might also be able to link to the oxidation state Wikipedia page. There is not a description of the various article sections, but it seems to be in line with other molecule based Wikipedia pages. You also appear to have misspelled Grignard and the grammar in the last two sentences should be reviewed (missing an "a" and an "an" respectively).

Content added is relevant and up to date.

Tone is balanced and there is no overt biases. There is no attempt to convince the reader of a specific opinion.

Sources are relevant, up to date and plentiful. The links work and a preliminary search returned no additional results that should have been included.

There are several grammatical errors and misspelled words. I would recommend giving everything another read or two. Some of the ones I could find are:


 * a missing "a" before THF adduct in the first sentence of the structure section
 * you have a comma in Pyykko's name instead of an apostrophe
 * a missing "a" before single bond
 * remove the "of" between either and chemical
 * add "The" before crystal structure and recrystallized
 * change with to "had a" before the geometries
 * add "The" in front of V-C
 * add "an" before insertion
 * change of to "with" and make functional group plural
 * remove the will after excess of CO and add "the" before formation
 * change to "the insertion product" instead of product from insertion
 * pluralize imine and amine
 * oxophilic is misspelled
 * add "a" before magnetic moment
 * add "the" before V-C bond
 * rewrite last sentence of the deoxygenation first paragraph, you say complex 3 times
 * add "the" before N=O and "a" before Cr=O

The images are helpful but you should also take another look at the figure captions and make sure everything is grammatically sound in those.

Overall, very good article once the last couple sections are filled in. The main revision suggestions are just grammatical and could probably be fixed by just moving the text into word or grammarly.