User:HiggyPiggyZ/African-American organized crime/Alexafrangella Peer Review

General info
HiggyPiggy7
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:HiggyPiggyZ/African-American_organized_crime?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * African-American organized crime

Evaluate the drafted changes
I liked how Madyson added a whole new section and went into more detail about black gangs and added a lot of new subheadings under the already existing headings. I also like how she added the section about in popular culture because I think it gives readers a better understanding since they are connecting the article to modern sources which makes it easier to understand. I think she can add how the gangs are structured and add more information about the actual gangs rather than just the background and history connected to them. Things I found confusing about the article were the quote from Kings as I don't see the relevance of having that quote included in the article. I am also confused on why there is a lot of mention and focus on other gangs within the article and I think it would be beneficial to center the article around African American gangs more.

Peer Review 2

Madyson made changes such as adding her lead and also a section about Prohibition and the Great Depression. I like the lead and how it introduces what is to come in the article without being too specific but I think something is missing from the lead and the way it ends doesn't set up the rest of the article to flow. I think by adding a few more sentences to the end of the lead, it will better prepare the reader when reading the article and make the article flow more easily. I do like the section about Prohibition and the Great Depression but I think more information can be added about black gangs and their operations during this time period. I also think the heading "21st century" can be broken down more and be more specific as to what will be discussed in this section.