User:HighQualityWater/User:IcecreamPenguin/Pre-workout/HighQualityWater Peer Review

General info
IcecreamPenguin
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:IcecreamPenguin/Pre-workout
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pre-workout

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead - Lead was not copied/updated by IcecreamPenguin from original article. Since IcecreamPenguin is updating an already written article, the current lead is sufficient and does not require attention as long as all of the updates are within the scope of the current lead. If any new information/subcategories are added to article, then it would be good to update the lead to reflect that.

Content - The added content pertains to the topic and is up to date. I recommend adding to the adverse effects section, perhaps include notable legal cases against or common misconceptions concerning pre-workout. The added about creatine in the history section is nice, would be good to include why it was considered bad initially but now is accepted. Elaborate on how Synephrine specifically contributes to adverse effects if that information's out there.

Tone and Balance - The tone of the article additions is neutral, especially in the ingredients section. The tone of the phrases "considered bad" and "one of the most used" don't feel right, might be better to swap them out for facts (what's the statistic that's telling us that creatine is one of the most used supplements). The article is off balance in that the adverse effects section seems much too short.

Sources and References - The sources are current and thorough with the majority of the added sources being academic journal articles. The links work as well. Good work!

Organization - The organization is great.

Images and Media - No images or media added.

Overall Impressions - The added content improves the article, especially that added in the history section and the adverse effects section. Improvements that can still be made include expanding the adverse effects section.