User:Hikmat Abdurrahman/sandbox

One of my poems and i need it to be checked out for errors BIRTHDAY The most courageous day And the most blissful hour When you came into the world The day that you came into the world It is the day of your birth The day that comes in a year, The day that comes in a finicky month The day that everybody wishes you happy birthday It is the day of the year on which you are born Thanks to the strong woman who carried you for long For a whole nine month or even one year And the man who raises you to be what you want