User:Hineshs0/Billy Eckstine/Dgillenwater Peer Review

Peer Review Comments: I like the information about his family members playing music for him in the weeks leading up to his death, but the comment seems out of place. Maybe reword it and try to fit in in the paragraph before it states "and died nearly a year later on March 8, 1993, in Pittsburgh, aged 78." My only other suggestion would be trying to add information under the 'Personal Life' header. It seems short and could maybe benefit from some more information.

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