User:Hineshs0/Billy Eckstine/StefanPiedrasanta Peer Review

Hineshs0: A look into Billy Eckstine

- The article you chose looks very helpful. The journal entry seems to be from a promising source and it is posted on google scholar.

- I like your addition to the article as well. I think the sentence helps bring more background to an important part of his life; his death.

- While looking at the rubric it may be helpful for you to find a little more information behind what music was played for him. Maybe just find the type or if it mentions he has a favorite song. However, it seems like this is the information you are looking for based on the source.

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