User:Hinrichs23/Active shooter training/Elijahknife Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hinrichs23


 * Link to draft you're reviewing https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hinrichs23/Active_shooter_training?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Active shooter training

Evaluate the drafted changes
So far this author has provided a brief outline of what they are going to cover, when thinking about what they are planning to edit. Next the author has set up bolded headings to guide the reader into what the information is and what to expect in their sandbox.

They provide a neutral tone in their review and provided a good list of references and resources from where they gathered their information. There were a couple spelling errors, nothing that was glaringly obvious but rather simple fixes.

As of now the author has the main bullets down of what they want to review, once she adds a little more supporting data from her outline and sources the article revamp will be updated adequately