User:Hippie2012/Civil rights movement/Potato Fanatic Peer Review

General info
Hippie2012
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Hippie2012/Civil rights movement
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):User:Hippie2012/Civil rights movement

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good Lead - I like how you embedded links into the wording. Perhaps you can add a little bit more information. I think it would be good if you added a little more content, or tried to revise a section.

I think you should add some references, or maybe just link them from the embedded links.

Consider adding images to help explain your topic more, although not necessary.

Overall, good start.