User:Hippie2012/Civil rights movement/Worm Insurrection Peer Review

General info
Hippie2012
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Hippie2012/Civil rights movement
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Civil rights movement

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content you added was clear, unbiased, and coherent. Your sentences also liked to other pages and were backed by a secondary source. The only improvement I would suggest is to break up some of your sentences. For example, instead of saying "and they began to realign", you can end the sentence and start the new one with "They began to realign". This would match the tone of the article more and makes the content easier to digest.