User:Hippolotamus/Panhellenic Games/Garrettjaffe4 Peer Review

Lead:

Couldn’t be more straight forward and non biased. The lead dose a great job of getting to the point and then the chart of when the games occurred and where is a great feature to better demonstrate there differences and cronlogy

Description:

dose a really good job of explaining how Greece coceptalized time and how this played into the games. Also dose a really good job of explaing what took place at the games as well as where they took place. That being said it could use a lot more citations.

Olympic Games:

dose a really good job at describing the history but could use maybe a little more about what took place in the games themselves. Could also use a little more citations. That being said the detail on the history is really impressive.

Rest of the articles

the rest of the articles my review is similar, could use some detail on what events were like as well as citations. That being said the history and diversity of sources are very good.

overveiw:

overll very strong additions and research. At the top you say your going to add more so I think if you do that it’ll be a even better article.