User:HistoryKrymz/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * History of Deaf Education in the US
 * Article Evaluation
 * Lead-the overview was brief and hit all the essential topics in deaf education history. The first paragraph was simple and straightforward. It wasn't missing any vital information, and it wasn't adding too much information. The structure: The structure was evident. Multiple headings guide you through the articles. The content was all in order based on the timeline. Balanced- The article was balanced and didn't focus on only one subtopic. The information was evenly divided throughout all sub-topics.   Tone: The tone was neutral throughout the text. There wasn't a tone of bias in the article. When discussing deaf education, it is easy to show your bias about the subject, but the article was well-written and neutral.  Sources: The sources for this article were reliable. There were many sources to go through, and none of the sources were from basic websites. Most sources were primary and secondary sources were academic/peer-reviewed.
 * Sources
 * file:///C:/Users/cassi/Downloads/education-09-00133-v2.pdf
 * file:///C:/Users/cassi/Downloads/education-09-00133-v2.pdf

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Tokugawa shogunate
 * Article Evaluation
 * The Lead: The lead is short and to the point. It gives a brief understanding of the topic without giving too much information. The Structure: At the beginning of the article, the structure is clear; but when you get closer to the end, and it says, Institution of Shogunate, it doesn't explain what that means. From there on, the article gets confusing. Tone: The tone was neutral, and it didn't feel like the writer was pushing a specific agenda.   Balance: Each subheading had about the same information and didn't favor one topic over another.  Sources: The sources were very good for this article. There were many primary sources, and non of the secondary sources came from .com or.org sites
 * Sources
 * https://www.utpjournals.press/doi/abs/10.3138/cjh.30.2.402?journalCode=cjh
 * Sources
 * https://www.utpjournals.press/doi/abs/10.3138/cjh.30.2.402?journalCode=cjh

Option 3

 * Article title
 * History of Tattooing
 * Article Evaluation
 * The Lead: The lead is short and straightforward but needs some information. The article is about the history of tattooing, and they should say what tattooing entails. The article doesn't mention tattooing and only talks about its history. The Structure: The structure is straightforward. It is missing a subtopic; it needs to include a more modern view of tattooing to include the 20th century. Balance: The article needs to be more balanced; the Ancient section is very small compared to the Traditional practices. There should be more information in the Ancient sub-topic.   Sources: There are a lot of sources, and many of them are primary. The secondary source for this article is academic and peer-reviewed.
 * Sources
 * https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/abs/10.1111/j.1524-4725.2005.31807?casa_token=ML4-qCit3rkAAAAA%3AimvANYsNsFiDKCbdF29NzpXI5MtpqMdkdtBHWc85zB-wRzj3MxrSe8MYLbNI7G0WOnKIiJETZ0W8
 * Sources
 * https://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/abs/10.1111/j.1524-4725.2005.31807?casa_token=ML4-qCit3rkAAAAA%3AimvANYsNsFiDKCbdF29NzpXI5MtpqMdkdtBHWc85zB-wRzj3MxrSe8MYLbNI7G0WOnKIiJETZ0W8

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Option 5

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