User:Historysarah/Linda James Myers/Pickles and Jupiter Peer Review

This is a nicely written article and very interesting! A few minor edits to consider:


 * 1) Early life and education: may be helpful to include the years of when James completed education
 * 2) It may be helpful to incorporate James Myers contributions to advancing or using optimal psychology. This section provides a great overview of what optimal psychology is, and linking it to the work of James Myers may be helpful.
 * 3) Great overview of the academic career and selected publications
 * 4) Wiki entry is well written, flows smoothly and appears to be free of spelling and grammatical mistakes.

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