User:HitroMilanese/Archive16

Draft: Sofia Moran
Thank you for reviewing the draft of Sofia Moran, Filipina Actress. Since most of any digital references are not available with her over 60 movies, and have actual hard copies from old clippings, there are many Wikipedia articles referencing her as with similar notable actors, actresses on Wikipedia. I believe I am very close to finalizing this article and have the contents to prove her notability status. Kindly assist with content I need to modify or delete, if any, to make this article publishable. Many Thanks in advance. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Magdaluyom1 (talk • contribs) 17:48, 26 November 2020 (UTC)


 * , Hello there, Please see Offline sources. You may add offline sources to the draft in order to verify the claims. It is better than leaving the claims unsourced. You may also want to see Citing sources. Regards. Hitro talk 07:07, 28 November 2020 (UTC)

Draft:BOX8
Hello,

Thank you for reviewing the Draft: BOX8. I realize that your feedback and comment is very constructive and helpful. I will work and improve on the notability part and independent mentions before resubmitting.

Thanks again! Regards, PalB09 (talk) 12:36, 30 November 2020 (UTC)

Draft:Kristián Mensa
hello Hitro, I have made adjustment to the tone of the draft. Also added references. Please see. I dont know where to go from here. Can you look into this? Thank you very much. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Uponmidas (talk • contribs) 18:04, 1 December 2020 (UTC)


 * Hello there, please make sure to submit the drafts for review before asking for help. Drafts are reviewed only after submission. Regards. Hitro talk 05:55, 2 December 2020 (UTC)

request for guidance
It looks like a recent article I submitted was rejected because the sources aren't "reliable."

As i read the instructions, the publications I am listing are legitimate and verifiable publications that cover music and the music business. I am writing a history on the Seattle music scene of the 90s and have access to original copies of these publications, as well as other third party sources that reference these publications (novels, biographies other histories, etc) Can you help me with guidance on other types of sources that would be considered reliable?

Delvechhiomethod (talk) 18:57, 3 December 2020 (UTC)
 * , Hello there, among the presented sources YouTube and the official website of the subject are not reliable. Guitar World is reliable but claims made within the draft are not verifiable. We do not have any clear consensus on the reliability of other sources so we can not deem them reliable. Are there no other online sources? Regards. Hitro talk 06:53, 4 December 2020 (UTC)

You rejected page for Akanksha Khatri
Hello,

You rejected page for Akanksha Khatri stating that Standalone notability has not been demonstrated. However We have attached multiple reference links that is her work and contribution beyond Masterchef. I have also added few more links. Can you please help me to resolve this and help to get it approved.

Thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Pjjikar (talk • contribs) 10:39, 4 December 2020 (UTC)


 * , Hello there, to be honest, I still do not see that WP:GNG has been met. You may submit the draft for review. I will leave it for a new set of eyes. Regards. Hitro talk 10:43, 4 December 2020 (UTC)

Can you have a look at this link? https://www.akankshakhatri.com/media — Preceding unsigned comment added by Pjjikar (talk • contribs) 11:10, 4 December 2020 (UTC)


 * I suggest you to add these sources to the draft (if you haven't) and wait for the review. In the course of reviewing the draft, I came across these references and felt that they are not enough for demonstrating notability. It would be better if another reviewer reviews it. Regards. <b style="color:Green; font-family:Times New Roman">Hitro</b><b style="color:#FF00FF; font-family:courier; font-size:small"> talk</b> 11:15, 4 December 2020 (UTC)

About NGC 1001
I didn't mean to submit the page to be official, I just wanted it saved somewhere so I could keep editting, sorry if it caused any inconvinience — Preceding unsigned comment added by Orion64WasTaken (talk • contribs) 19:15, 4 December 2020 (UTC)


 * Hello there, the article is at the draft space now. You may improve and submit it when ready. Regards. <b style="color:Green; font-family:Times New Roman">Hitro</b><b style="color:#FF00FF; font-family:courier; font-size:small"> talk</b> 07:13, 6 December 2020 (UTC)

Thank you for your review
Thanks for reviewing the page, Draft:Scott McGlynn. I appreciate it. Can you clarify what did you exactly mean by "Some of the presented sources do not appear notable"? Which of those sources are not reliable? thanks in advance. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Blosmccoy (talk • contribs) 20:26, 4 December 2020 (UTC)


 * , Hello there, I meant "reliable sources" not "notable sources". I've fixed my comment. Please see WP:GNG, you are required to introduce sources where the topic has received significant coverage. This is just a passing mention and this does not appear reliable. Regards. <b style="color:Green; font-family:Times New Roman">Hitro</b><b style="color:#FF00FF; font-family:courier; font-size:small"> talk</b> 07:19, 6 December 2020 (UTC)

Thanks for explaining this. can you please check these sources? are they in accordance with wp:gng?

MSN SW Argus BBC Huff post

There are many other sources. Thanks. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Blosmccoy (talk • contribs) 14:20, 7 December 2020 (UTC)


 * , Hello there, BBC and MSN article appear good. Please add them to the draft and demonstrate notability per WP:GNG. Please see WP:PROVEIT, the burden to demonstrate notability lies with the draft creator. Make sure to use encyclopedic and neutral tone as you are a paid editor. Regards. <b style="color:Green; font-family:Times New Roman">Hitro</b><b style="color:#FF00FF; font-family:courier; font-size:small"> talk</b> 08:38, 8 December 2020 (UTC)
 * , Thank you for your valuable feedback. I understand these guidelines and the burden to demonstrate notability. I'll revise the draft accordingly in a neutral encyclopedic tone. I'll let you know when done.

Best Regards


 * Hi Hitro, I've revised the draft with additional references and tried to be as neutral as possible. Please review it and give your valuable feedback. Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Blosmccoy (talk • contribs) 09:10, 9 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Thank you for your guidance and reviewing the draft. I really appreciate it. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Blosmccoy (talk • contribs) 10:56, 9 December 2020 (UTC)

Ready for submission
https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:South_Indian_Derby Since this draft was rejected due to poor presenatation, I have made necessary arrangements so that it cab be resubmitted for AFC. Please see this https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Shahoodu/sandbox#Chennaiyin_FC_v_Kerala_Blasters which is the present structure of article that I am going to submit. Please tell your feedback regarding this. Please note one more section is missing ( Chennaiyin vs Bengaluru) which Im currently working on Shahoodu (talk) 11:20, 6 December 2020 (UTC)


 * Hello there, I guess you have already created this article on the mainspace. It looks in a better shape. Regards. <b style="color:Green; font-family:Times New Roman">Hitro</b><b style="color:#FF00FF; font-family:courier; font-size:small"> talk</b> 06:53, 7 December 2020 (UTC)

Article on OVO-TECH - new sources added
So, I have added a new, credible link which is not just passing mentions however is in Polish - I am not sure if it is a problem though. Could you please re-verify? :) The article link is: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:OVO-TECH, and the new source which has an in depth article on our company link is: https://echodnia.eu/swietokrzyskie/maszyny-od-malej-firmy-ze-starachowic-kupuje-tysiace-przedsiebiorstw-na-calym-swiecie-ich-produkty-trafiaja-do-setek-milionow/ar/c15-15061950

It is a public publisher and it is not a sponsored article. They decided to do an article on us because we were coming out with new UV disinfection lamps during COVID times, and I think it is the most in-depth article covering our company so far.

Cheers, McG — Preceding unsigned comment added by McG4evah (talk • contribs) 11:32, 7 December 2020 (UTC)


 * , Hello there, the link that you provided is not working. However, a reviewer has already rejected the submission. I suggest you to see WP:NCOMPANY, and if you believe that you can establish notability as per the guidelines then recreate this draft. Unless the notability is established, the draft will not be accepted. Regards. <b style="color:Green; font-family:Times New Roman">Hitro</b><b style="color:#FF00FF; font-family:courier; font-size:small"> talk</b> 08:47, 8 December 2020 (UTC)

New sources added for OVO-TECH
Hello there, I am not sure why the link doesn't work for you, it works perfectly fine for me. The source is totally independent from us, as well. — Preceding unsigned comment added by McG4evah (talk • contribs) 10:03, 8 December 2020 (UTC)


 * , Hello there, In order to demonstrate notability you are required to introduce multiple sources where the topic has received significant coverage. This is the core of the notability guideline. Regards. <b style="color:Green; font-family:Times New Roman">Hitro</b><b style="color:#FF00FF; font-family:courier; font-size:small"> talk</b> 07:43, 9 December 2020 (UTC)

Req
Hi @Hitro as there was no article on this man Raybak Abdesselem as he was the winner of the Karate championship in 2019, can you help me to fix the info box if possible and patrol the page? As I have not added enough data to the info box.

--CGOV (talk) 13:21, 9 December 2020 (UTC)


 * , Hello there, I will look into this later. What sort of help do you require in fixing the infobox? It looks fine to me. Regards. <b style="color:Green; font-family:Times New Roman">Hitro</b><b style="color:#FF00FF; font-family:courier; font-size:small"> talk</b> 13:27, 9 December 2020 (UTC)


 * , Hi thank you for responding, is it necessary to add awards to the info box or team names, years of performance, coach etc.?

--CGOV (talk) 13:33, 9 December 2020 (UTC)


 * No, it is not necessary to add. Apart from that, I am not sure about the notability guidelines for karate. Gymnasts are deemed notable if they win an individual medal at Youth Olympic Games. But I am not sure about karateka. See WP:GYMNAST. I will leave it for another reviewer to review. Regards. <b style="color:Green; font-family:Times New Roman">Hitro</b><b style="color:#FF00FF; font-family:courier; font-size:small"> talk</b> 13:41, 9 December 2020 (UTC)


 * , Hi thanks for letting me know about info box, and yes passing notability of Gymnastics. Passing junior gymnastic notability as well as artistics. according to the france karateka and WKF website.

--CGOV (talk) 13:48, 9 December 2020 (UTC)

Draft: High Atlas Foundation
Hi. On "Draft: High Atlas Foundation," the inline citations follow the WP guidelines. Please explain your comment. Thank you. — Preceding unsigned comment added by EllenH63 (talk • contribs) 17:18, 9 December 2020 (UTC)


 * , Hello there, You should fix the URL of the references so that the reader may click them to access the website. Currently, all the references are plain text instead of hyperlinks. Regards. <b style="color:Green; font-family:Times New Roman">Hitro</b><b style="color:#FF00FF; font-family:courier; font-size:small"> talk</b> 07:06, 10 December 2020 (UTC)

Radium Carbonate
Thanks for reviewing my draft and making it an article! -322UbnBr2 (Talk &#124; Contributions &#124; Actions) 18:02, 10 December 2020 (UTC)

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