User:HitroMilanese/Archive20

Baqibillah Mishkat Chowdhury
Hello, HitroMilanese,

I saw on WikiProject Articles for creation/List of reviewers by subject that you are a AFC reviewer who has some knowledge of Islam. Could you look over this article? I believe the page creator says it passed AFC review but I find that doubtful. Thanks for any help you can offer. Liz Read! Talk! 02:27, 25 November 2021 (UTC)


 * Hello Liz,
 * I guess TheAafi has taken care of this article and correctly so. I would have draftified it too. Regards. Hitro talk 07:04, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

Help
My Submission has been declined. Please help me. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sundergnan (talk • contribs) 07:28, 25 November 2021 (UTC)


 * Hello there, please see WP:YFA and improve your submission accordingly. Regards. Hitro talk 07:36, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

Bar Council of Rajasthan
Hi Hitro. Thanks for your time and efforts in reviewing this article and helping me post in main space. Have a nice day. Gardenkur (talk) 11:02, 25 November 2021 (UTC)

User:Sydneymathis/sandbox / Draft:Frank Rothman
You declined this draft of an article Frank Rothman on the basis it did not show notability. But I think you may not have noticed that he was the subject of a full NYTimes obituary, and it has been consistently held in hundreds of afd discussions that this is sufficient evidence of notability to support an article: (there is a question that needs to be checked about the degree of possible copypaste). After this is checked, I will accept the article.

I have also done what we usually do for any serious submission, moved it to the correct place, which is Draft:Frank Rothman  DGG ( talk ) 02:11, 26 November 2021 (UTC)


 * Hello, I did notice that, still, with lack of inline citation, it is not determined whether the draft is properly sourced. As of now it appears that large portion of this submission is unsourced. Regards. Hitro talk 07:27, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
 * -- unsourced material can be removed. There should be enough in the NYT obit. I knoq opinion can differ  about whether to do it ourself or send it back';  if it's easy, I just do it, it's simpler than explaining.   DGG ( talk ) 10:16, 26 November 2021 (UTC)

Thank you for your feedback!
HitroMilanese, thank you for your speedy feedback. Much appreciated. I removed the IMDB reference/text, and added a newer reference that is 3rd party for the one film where that was applicable.

Cheers! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Teaspoontornado (talk • contribs) 23:50, 28 November 2021 (UTC)
 * , Hello there, I am still not convinced that WP:MUSICBIO is met, however, I will leave this one for another reviewer. Regards. Hitro talk</b> 06:18, 15 December 2021 (UTC)

Alain Guélis
Hello hitro milanese, I did not get any answer from you concerning the article on the composer Alain Guélis, I made a certain number of modifications in the direction of your recommendations; I would like to advance with your invaluable advice.

Sincerely

--AMPYTRION (talk) 21:22, 6 December 2021 (UTC)


 * , Hello there, I apologize if I missed your message earlier. I suggest you to submit the draft and wait for someone to review it. Regards. <b style="color:Green; font-family:Times New Roman">Hitro</b><b style="color:#FF00FF; font-family:courier; font-size:small"> talk</b> 06:20, 15 December 2021 (UTC)

Hello Hitro Milanese, thanks for replying, so I'll try to submit my article, but what I'd really like to avoid is it being deleted altogether and having to start all over again, how do I get the draft back in that case?

AMPYTRION (talk) 19:07, 17 December 2021 (UTC)

HitroMilanese Please assist would be greatly appreciated
Recently submitted an article about TCG World and was declined due to references. What do I need to do to get the article approved? Any advice would be greatly appreciated:) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Metaverse man (talk • contribs) 05:47, 11 December 2021 (UTC)


 * Hello there, additional references in independent and reliable sources are essential to demonstrate notability per WP:GNG. Avoid using primary and self published sources. Also see WP:INLINE and fix the inline citation appropriately. Regards. <b style="color:Green; font-family:Times New Roman">Hitro</b><b style="color:#FF00FF; font-family:courier; font-size:small"> talk</b> 06:53, 15 December 2021 (UTC)

Draft Alain Guélis
Hi Hitro Milanese, thanks for replying, so I'll try to submit my article, but what I'd really like to avoid is it being deleted altogether and having to start all over again, how do I get the draft back in that case?

--AMPYTRION (talk) 19:08, 17 December 2021 (UTC)


 * Hello Ampytrion, drafts won't be deleted unless it goes unedited for 6 months. In case your draft gets deleted then you can always request for undeletion at WP:REFUND. Regards. <b style="color:Green; font-family:Times New Roman">Hitro</b><b style="color:#FF00FF; font-family:courier; font-size:small"> talk</b> 08:53, 1 January 2022 (UTC)