User:Hitsujii/Porc-Epic Cave/Trip732 Peer Review

Peer review
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General info

 * Reviewing: Hitsujii
 * Link: Porc-Epic Cave

Lead evaluation
The lead is well-organized and easy to understand. The most significant information is addressed, but it is not overly repetitive and does not simply restate the article. The introductory sentence is clear and provides a brief overview of the articles subject. The lead paragraph is concise and all of the information is relevant. I suggest adding a few more citations to support the information.

Content evaluation
The content is relevant and up-to-date. It would be useful to add the environmental conditions, both former and current, and address any major climate changes.

Tone and balance evaluation
The tone of the article is neutral and does not introduce any bias. None of the content is over- or under-represented of a particular perspective. All claims are supported by references and none appear to be heavily biased.

Sources and references evaluation
All of the content is supported by a reliable and scholarly source. The sources are recent and focus on the content. The reference section is clear of links to blogs, biased articles, and self-published authors. I checked a few links and they all brought me to the correct article. I recommend adding a few more references to avoid being too dependent on certain sources.

Organization evaluation
The organization of the article is concise and easy to read. The organization is applicable to my own article and I plan to adjust the organization of my article to reflect yours. I did not notice and major grammatical or spelling errors. The sections are arranged in a practical order and all the information under each section is relevant to the articles topic. I suggest adding a short summary paragraph under the Archaeological evidence sub-heading to avoid having a sub-heading directly under a sub-heading with no content.

Images and media evaluation
The article includes a map that enhances the readers understanding of the physical location of the cave. I recommend adding Ethiopia in the caption under the maps image. Try searching Wiki Commons for any available images of the Rock art or Tool technology if you have not already.

New Article Evaluation
The article is supported by a sufficient number of reliable sources. All of the sources are relevant and representative of all available data. The sources do not focus too heavily on one subject. The content of the page draws evenly from all the sources and does not rely too heavily on a single source. I suggest linking your article to the Middle Stone Age sub-section of the African Archaeology page.

Overall evaluation
Overall, the page is representative of the topic. I did not notice and major problems and think you're off to a great start. I recommend expanding on the excavations of each archaeologist if the information is available.