User:Hjnelson02/Ammonia pollution/Bryanhuynh8 Peer Review

General info
Hjnelson02
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Hjnelson02/Ammonia pollution
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Ammonia pollution

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead: I think that the lead does a good job at introducing the topic, but I would suggest adding more detail about the

Content: I think the content you have provided is great. It is concise and well written. I liked that you had two different sections about the freshwater and saltwater effects.

Tone & Balance: The tone of the article is neutral and factual. There is no indication of bias.

Sources & References: The sources provided are relevant to the what is presented in the article. I liked how links to other Wikipedia articles were added for words that are not as known.

Organization: I think that the organization of this article is amazing. The sections were concise and deliberate.

Images & Media: There is an image of the the reaction of ammonia and water which is nice but I would like to see a caption underneath it to help with the clarity.

Overall: Overall I this is a concise and straight to the point draft. The sections are well laid out and are balanced. I would suggest expanding the lead because it is a bit short. Other than that, great job!