User:Hk1546/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title
 * Public utilities commission


 * Article Evaluation
 * The content is relevant to the topics and written neutrally. There isn't any talk about it in the talk section. There is no mention about the equity gap. In the links there are many Wikipedia links to state public commissions but don't talk much about PUC in general. Citations are reliable.


 * Sources
 * National Association of Regulatory Utility Commissioners
 * Public Service Commissioner (state executive office)

Option 2

 * Article title
 * Banila Co.


 * Article Evaluation
 * The content is relevant but has a flag saying that it may be written to be an advertisement which I don't think is true. They just listed what products the company uses and ingredients however they do not promote anything and keep a neutral tone. Since it is a Korean brand it touches on asians who are underrepresented. It is on the start class in quality and mild importance to WikiProject Retailing. The sources are not reliable because it comes from Magazines.


 * Sources
 * "Min Hyo Rin shows off her beauty for 'Banila Co.'"
 * "SISTAR's Hyorin endorses 'Banila Co.'"

Option 3

 * Article title
 * Tiffany & Co.


 * Article Evaluation
 * The content is relevant and is written neutrally. When looking at the sources most of the sources are from news channels such as CNN. Most claims do have citations but there are some that says "need citation". It's also important to mention that Tiffany is very diverse but it isn't shown on the article. No mention about fine jewelry process or complete list of collections.


 * Sources
 * "Tiffany & Co. (TIF) NYSE - Nasdaq Real Time Price. Currency in USD"
 * "History of Tiffany & Company – FundingUniverse"

Option 4

 * Article title
 * Vineyard Vines


 * Article Evaluation
 * The content is relevant to the topic and seems to be written neutrally. The big claims with deals have citations to them. It doesn't address why equity gaps mostly due to brand. The history part is written a bit unprofessionally and sounds like the training video you watch.


 * Sources
 * "How To Vineyard Like Shep and Ian Murray of Vineyard Vines"
 * Crain's Chicago Business

Option 5

 * Article title
 * Potato salad


 * Article Evaluation
 * The article is pretty short and only had a paragraph on it. It is written in a neutral tone however, it lacks diversity. It addresses how potato salad is common in Western cultures such as Europe and the US however it is also common in asian cultures as well. They could have also used better sources such as the NPR podcast about rethinking potato salad.


 * Sources
 * "» Potato Salad: History"