User:Hkhan11/Antipsychotic/Birmaniahern Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hkhan11


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Hkhan11/Antipsychotic


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Antipsychotic

Evaluate the drafted changes
I was a little bit confused reading what you have so far. Everything is kind of in a random place and the article doesn't have a lead paragraph that goes into the main idea of the article. You should definitely add more to include the different topics that were described about the article. Include more sources in your article as well to give background to the information. If there are any current studies on your topic, I would include that since it will give the readers an insight into the current topic. Overall, what you have so far is good. I was just include more information from the article that you think will benefit it and from other secondary sources as well.