User:Hkhan11/Antipsychotic/Denisej 2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hkhan11


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hkhan11/Antipsychotic?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Antipsychotic

Evaluate the drafted changes
The edits that you have made regarding certain word usage will create more conciseness and clarity within the article. I also see that you have annotated areas to include citations. I think this could be a good start, I would suggest accessing meta-analyses, textbooks, and literature reviews to find general definitions if you see areas that are not original ideas or knowledge. I would also suggest looking up the phrase online to see if it is plagiarized according to Wikipedia's guidelines.

Some other edits you could make is for the Lead of the article due to its length. Some of the information in the lead could possible have its own subheading such as the last paragraph discussing more historical aspects.