User:Hkhan11/Antipsychotic/Eresha8 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hkhan11


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hkhan11/Antipsychotic?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Antipsychotic

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead section of this article does benefit from the tweaks you have made so far, and will benefit from the ones it seems you wish to implement. This lead section does feel a bit overly detailed, and I think the article could be improved by making the opening more concise, as it serves not to overwhelm the reader. I also feel that some of the opening can be moved to other sections of the article, for example final paragraph of the lead could be moved to the history section. The information that you have added does have a neutral tone, however it seems that the reference you used needs some tweaking in the date values. The source itself does seem to be quality and recent one, although I would recommend trying to find a meta-analysis that also supports your claim. The additions are well written and grammatically correct, and could be improved by suggestions already in the sandbox draft. I believe adding images into the main article could benefit the overall aesthetic, as it would help to break up the dense blocks of text. Overall, your addition improves the article, but I do wish to see more changes such as the ones suggested above.