User:Hkrage22/Debbie Schneider/Gunnar hensley12 Peer Review

This draft looks good
 * 1) This content is well written. It demonstrates a clear topic and represents Debbie well. I like how the paragraphs are divided up and it has a really nice flow to it. I like how it introduces a main topic then goes in chronological order.
 * 2) The content added is up to date. They have information about her college life as well as in the 9to5 organization. They also added information about her involvement with SEIU post 9to5.
 * 3) The article does not include any images and not a lot of links to other articles. I think that it would be helpful if there was a non copyright image that they could add to have a face to the name.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hkrage22


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hkrage22/Debbie_Schneider?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

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