User:Hla19/Marine pollution/00BlueSky00 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hla19


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Hla19/Marine pollution


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Marine pollution

Evaluate the drafted changes
I would consider producing a draft to the lead that introduces the addition of the policies.

I like that you are starting with the laws and policies. I see that you have the basic information about them and I am assuming you will be going into more context maybe regarding the negatives effects of these or issues with them. I think this information is as neutral as it can be but I would make sure to say pros and cons of the laws and policies.

Are you going to keep them are separate pieces or are they going to be combined into one paragraph? I am not sure which route you are going.

The citations work, though I think more of the information might need some citations. Overall, this looks like a great start!