User:Hlnmnucla/Mexico Femicides/Lulu0102 Peer Review

General info
Hlnmnucla
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hlnmnucla/Mexico_Femicides?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Femicide in Mexico
 * Femicide in Mexico

Evaluate the drafted changes
It seems like you are just getting started, but as you work on your wiki edits, keep in mind your language. Try and keep it unbiased and avoid grammar mistakes. Also keep in mind the timeline you are working with. Is this presently occuring or in the past? This should also be reflected in your language (use present tense if it is still occuring and past tense if it already happened). Also, try to keep your references scholarly and reliable. From my edits, I learned that it's important to cite whenever you mention an article and make your info flow. Adding sub-headings are also a great way to organize your additions. Good luck and looking forward to reading your additions!