User:Hmcleod21/sandbox

Hi guys! This is our sandbox for the project!

Make sure when anyone adds ANYTHING to this sandbox or a talk page to sign everything you add. This will make sure Dr. CLoud can find what each of us have contributed!Haley Lamborn (talk) 06:40, 3 March 2020 (UTC)

This section will talk about the overall plan of how we will go about editing our article and keep track of each item we edit.
It will be important for each of us to see what the others have edited and talk about these changes. Therefore, I suggest we each copy the changes we are wanting to make to the article into the EDITS section of this sandbox so everyone in this group will have direct access to what everyone else is editing. This will also make it easier on us, because we won't have to go search for what our group has contributed in the actual article where items may disappear or get buried under other comments!Haley Lamborn (talk) 06:50, 3 March 2020 (UTC)

I am open to any other ideas Y'all have about how we should go about editing this article! Please, if you have any suggestions leave them here!Haley Lamborn (talk) 06:50, 3 March 2020 (UTC)

Edits
I added a citation to the first sentence, and also added England on to several location listed within the article as it was unclear as to where these places were. I also deleted a sentence in the Early Life period of the article as it did not pertain to the article and was very similar to the original wording in the source article.Haley Lamborn (talk) 05:32, 8 March 2020 (UTC)

Schedules and Updates
==== This section will be where we can set goals for our group, such as schedules and due dates of things like the PEER REVIEW that is coming up very soon. This will help to insure everyone is on the same page! I encourage everyone to set goals for themselves and feel totally free to add to this schedule or goal list! Also, if you have any questions or suggestions about the schedule feel free to leave a comment in this section under the item you are concerned with!Haley Lamborn (talk) 06:37, 3 March 2020 (UTC) ==== SCHEDULE PEER REVIEW Okay guys, the PEER REVIEW is coming up very quickly, much quicker then I expected. Therefore, we need to jump start our discussions and edits to our article ASAP! From how I understand it, the PEER REVIEW works by other students grading what we have edited and added to our article, therefore we have to have something added to our articles in order to show that we have been working on it! I think (please correct me if I'm wrong) that Dr. Cloud said that the Peer review is going to be due BEFORE spring break, which basically gives us a week to get something edited on our article. Preferably, I would like each of us to make 3 EDITS to the article in some way by the end of Friday. Before adding edits to the actual article, make sure to address what you will be adding or subtracting from the article in the articles Talk page. Remember when doing this to be sure to sign all 3 of your contributions to the Talk page by adding 4~'s after your contribution. This will make it easy for Dr. Cloud to tell what we have each edited. The edits do not have to huge, simply adding a few sentences for each edit would be enough for now! I will try and leave a list of items to possibly edit in the ITEMS NEEDING FURTHER REVIEW section of this sandbox! Remember that you MUST cite all sources that you have pulled your information from. Thank you everyone for your hard work, I know this project seems daunting, but if we all contribute we will have the project done in no time! Haley Lamborn (talk) 06:37, 3 March 2020 (UTC)

Items Needing Further Review

 * Make sure all information in existing article is properly sourced.Haley Lamborn (talk) 06:37, 3 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Make sure all Photographs are properly sourced.Haley Lamborn (talk) 06:37, 3 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Make sure all citations included in the bibliography are correctly formatted. Haley Lamborn (talk) 06:37, 3 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Read through the sources we have compiled, is all existing information in the article factual?Haley Lamborn (talk) 06:37, 3 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Is the existing information easy to understand?Haley Lamborn (talk) 06:37, 3 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Should the article be re-ordered?Haley Lamborn (talk) 06:37, 3 March 2020 (UTC) -These are only a few ideas of what each of us could edit! If any of you have any more ideas feel free to leave them here!Haley Lamborn (talk) 06:37, 3 March 2020 (UTC)

About Each Source
==== I think it would be a good idea to give a brief description of what each of our sources is about so that it will be easier for all of us to find the information we are looking for later on.Haley Lamborn (talk) 06:37, 3 March 2020 (UTC) ==== In the article, a  Q&A with Andy Goldsworthy , Goldsworthy states that he feels photography is one of the best ways to capture the true essence of his works, much better then preserving it in any gallery space ever could. He sums up the fact that being in a gallery space, puts the art work in a type of suspension, where as leaving the work outside to transform with nature gives his work a space it needs to truly be experienced. He has said that his works need sunlight, and that photography can help capture the utmost perfect moments of his work. Moments that would never happen in a museum as they could never be sustained and are always ever fleeting. ~ Haley Lamborn (talk) 06:37, 3 March 2020 (UTC)

The article, The Stunning Land Art of Andy Goldsworthy, is more of a traditional bibliography, detailing the development of Goldsworthy's life, and the influences that have come to shape his art works. Haley Lamborn (talk) 06:37, 3 March 2020 (UTC)

The article, Andy Goldsworthy Walking Wall, is a article produced by the Nelson-Atkins Museum of Art, and details the installation that Goldsworthy recently finished at the Nelson. This article contains stages of his work and contains links to his personal artist website. Haley Lamborn (talk) 06:37, 3 March 2020 (UTC)