User:Hmerzai/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Ömer Koç

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I kind a knew him. He is the the son of vehbi koc; and after vehbi's death, Omer koc became the new head of Koc Holding. And Koc Family is the richest family in Turkey. Omer Koc himself studied at Columbia Business School and He knows ancient greek language and he is intterested in art and he is one of top 200 art collectors in the world.

Evaluate the article
The lead section of the article is very concise and containing enough information.The content of the article is up to date and gives information about his education and his interests. The overall tone of the article is very neutral and gives only recorded data about him and sounds like a scientific research book tone. The references used in this article usually websites and journals; he has been mentioned in Financial Times and Forbes. It is a well-organized article with simple and clear sentences. On the article page he has only one page about himself and I think the picture illustrates him very well since he is a businessman and the picture taken by the user who shared it on wikipedia. Surprisingly, there is no discussion on the article's talk page. The article classified as "Start-class" and "Low-importance".The overall shape of the article is looking good and as I mentioned at the beginning; it is very concise. Since, he is not a very out going person and avoiding media(magazine) it is somewhat hard to find information about him.