User:Hmerzai/Political symbolism/Henhaoji12345 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hmerzai


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hmerzai/Political_symbolism?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Political symbolism (already changed so i went back to history and "evaluated")

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I like how you took off the first sentence and merged the three main ways into one (making it more concise. I like how you added a picture of the Israel flag, to me that screams political symbolism. I feel like maybe adding more examples is an option since what happened was really just polishing, if you really wanted to add things.