User:Hnas111/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Inclusion (education) - Wikipedia

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I am interested in the topic of inclusion education because I believe that all children should have equal opportunities. Inclusive education benefits all students, and promotes values I share such as respect and tolerance.

Evaluate the article
(Compose a detailed evaluation of the article here, considering each of the key aspects listed above. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what a useful Wikipedia article evaluation looks like.)

Before the lead section began there was a box that stated : " The examples and perspective in this article may not represent a worldwide view of the subject. You may improve this article, discuss the issue on the talk page, or create a new article, as appropriate." (February 2018)

Lead section

The introduction was concise, citing the reasons what inclusion is, and why inclusion is important.

Yes, the content was relevant to talking, although the article focus is inclusion in the US. Although it references Denmark in the inclusion rates around the world, this section could be improved. I would think though it would be difficult to find data for other countries. Yes, the article does deal with a topic that deals with an unrepresented population.

Yes, the article is neutral, although it seems that the writer supports inclusion. A worldwide viewpoint is under represented. The article quotes current sources. I am not sure if the authors are historically marginized individuals as that information is not readily made available. The links all work. The article although lengthy is easy to read. I did not note any grammatical or spelling mistakes. Yes, the article is broken down into sub-topics. The article contains two images. One was appropriately captioned, and the other was not. Yes, the images are laid out in a visually appealing way.

On the talk page, the notes stated there include a point that the article lacks references. The article is a part of a Wiki- education Foundation post. The article could use additional modifications.