User:HnlSantino/Ancient Hawaiian aquaculture/FilthyAtFive Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

HnlSantino


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:HnlSantino/Ancient Hawaiian aquaculture


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Ancient Hawaiian aquaculture

Evaluate the drafted changes
Added a massive section for "types of fishponds". By far the biggest edit out of any other students' articles I could find. All of the information is relevant, useful, and has citations that seem to be credible and there are multiple. I really can't find what to pick apart from this addition, nobody else's article contributions even come close from what I've seen.