User:Hockettc30/Vilabouly Complex, Laos/Mminerp3 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hockettc30


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hockettc30/Vilabouly_Complex%2C_Laos?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article seems to have a good idea of what will be discussed in the final version but definitely needs some information added. The intro section is off to a good start and gives a good background on the site. Once the information for the sections below are added, some of the main points should be added to the intro to give a detailed account of what the article is about! The headings and notes provided seem like they will make a really informational article. My suggestions would be to add information on where exactly the site is located in Laos/ What geographical feature is it near by (river? Ocean? Mountain ranges?), a map would also be very helpful! I think if possible it would also be interesting to talk about the type of artifacts that have been found made out of the materials listed. The tone in this article is pretty neutral, the only thing I noticed was the sentence in the intro that says "the Vilabouly Complex will hold all the power of the region" sounds a little off. I think either claiming that it does hold the power if true or saying something along the lines of "it is believed that the complex possibly held the power of the region". Overall I would say this article has a good organizational structure with proper headings and an intro and reference section. All the references seem to be reliable but it doesn't look like they are linked so make sure you are adding them through the cite button as well as adding in-text citations. This article seems to be heading in the right direction, it just needs some information added too elaborate on the framework provided. With a few corrections this article will be looking great!