User:Hockeydunkin/Global Historical Climatology Network/Sallupoli Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Audrey


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Hockeydunkin/Global Historical Climatology Network
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Global Historical Climatology Network
 * Global Historical Climatology Network

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think your draft looks great. I like how organized the draft is as well. The original page does not do a good job organizing each part and describing the as well. I really like dhow you added much more to the history section, that was certainly a piece of knowledge that was left out, however you did a great job adding that in. I also see you have many sources and they all are legit. I think the edit is certainly going in the right direction, great job!