User:Hohl0020/Freshwater acidification/Board073 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hohl0020


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hohl0020/Freshwater_acidification?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Freshwater acidification

Evaluate the drafted changes
The article is in good shape but your sandbox draft only says 'Hello'. There could be addition photos that help demonstrate ways runoff enters freshwater leading to increased acidification. You could find additional ways SO, N, & P enter the freshwater systems. I think there could be more information about long-term and short-term affects of acidification- how does it effect fishing? fish larvae?