User:Hohl0020/Freshwater acidification/Starfruit101 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hohl0020, Emma113144


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hohl0020/Freshwater_acidification?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Freshwater acidification

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall information provided very general. There is obviously much more to be done. I like the information provided regarding the contrast of freshwater and ocean acidification.